Tears for GlastonburyAn extract from my longer story 'As the clouds marched over Glastonbury'. These chapters tell the story of Sarah at a party, and the uncontrollable lust men feel for women. Please check out the full story if you enjoy this. |
Comments
Star Confetti (06-08-07)
wonderful story. The character of Sarah comes alive as you read the story. Its not that this kind of situation is common, but its very real because it COUD happen to anyone. You paint a wonderful image of a life changing event.... Keep it up :)
steveoco (20-06-07)
The character Sarah is really fleshed out here. I like that you include the details that make the scene three dimensional. Even the rasspy voice of the man at the desk.
Keep it up!